Some thoughts on Kestrel's Eye

If we could put a camera on their heads so could see from their perspective that would make it more interesting I think. We'd be able to see where they were looking and how fast they change the angle or view. Also would be able to see what flying looks like.

It would also be really interesting if we could interpret their calls and chirping so that we know what they were saying. That would make it more interesting for sure. 

Lastly, I think commentary on some aspects would be helpful. As Carlson believes, we mush have knowledge to appreciate. So understanding what the birds were doing at some points would be helpful. Like with the runt baby and when they were all in side of the building. Also at some points, were they hovering or flying?